I had the pleasure of interviewing my friend and co-author on Prose & Cons, Joe Clifford. After you read this interview I’m sure you will agree there aren’t many authors who would have answered my tough questions with such honesty. Joe is a rare person. He’s talented, humble, funny, an all-around nice guy. But don’t tell him I told you, he has a rep to uphold.
I’m taking a masters class through Writers Village and I thought I’d share with you the “secret formula” to your opening lines.
It’s called the Hologram test. What is the Hologram test? It’s a golden rule that the first 100 words of your novel be a hologram, a teasing but true sample of the wares to come.
So how can you make sure your story passes this all-important test and wins the hearts of readers?
Here are 3 simple ways:
When does a writer make the leap to author?
This is a question I’ve pondered for years. I know what “they” say. By “they” I assume it means industry standards. They say a writer becomes an author once they become published. OK, let’s use that standard. Does that mean traditionally published or self-published?
First let me say I am not bashing self-publishing. I’ve thought about it many times myself. Please do not take this as an attack because it’s NOT.
So, you stay a “writer” until you get a book deal from a publisher. OK. Well, what if it’s a brand new publisher that no one has ever heard of? Does that count? Obviously if you’re lucky enough to get a deal from one of the “Big 5″ you have definitely morphed from writer to author. But why? Because you were in the right place at the right time? Continue reading
I just completed the first draft of my latest novel, the sequel to Timber Point. The working title was Dancing In The Shadows. However, after completing the novel I thought of a title that fits better: Silent Betrayal.
I often post about what stage I’m at in the process. Therefore, today’s post is about creating tension and suspense in your thriller. (Or in my case, make sure it’s done correctly during editing.) Keep readers on the edge of their seat, flipping the pages.
I came across an article about this topic. If you haven’t read The Kill Zone blog, I highly recommend it. These tips were posted in that blog, but I added my own flair to them. The expository is mine to help you better understand.
1. Condense your setup and backstory.
Nothing is worse than reading ten pages about nothing. All fluff. Or hearing about the protagonist’s entire life story. The author should know the story, but your reader doesn’t need every small detail. However, IF parts of the backstory is relevant to the story line– keep it. Just make it as short as possible. Give the crucial elements your reader NEEDS to know without the fluff. Add emotions, yes, but don’t let it lag along for pages and pages.
For those of you who have followed this blog, you know I am a member of Prose & Cons.
For those of you who are new to this community: Prose & Cons is a multi-author blog, aka the gang of twenty-one. We blog about books, the people who read them, write them, and everything in between.
A couple of weeks ago I posted the first half of my short story, Out of the Darkness, on Prose & Cons and re-posted it here. Tomorrow is part two. I will again re-post here for those of you who aren’t following this amazing authors blog. For those of you who would like to check out Prose & Cons the address is: http://www.auniqueandportablemagic.blogspot.com.
Hope to see you all there!
If not, I will see you here for part two of Out of the Darkness.